Some comments to my poem below, Atlantis- CoP, by pals from LotrPlaza (http://www.lotrplaza.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=221661&KW=From+the+Shadows&PID=6497497)!

Vinca- "Your ahead of me, I haven't ever opened a poetry thread! (I'm not good at poetry) I like your poem though, its pretty! I'm not much of a reviewer, so don't expect long reviews from me, but I love it! Good work ."

Silver Dragon- "Oh, I loved it! You're very brave for opening a poetry thread, none of mine's near as good as this...Atlantis has always fascinated me anyway, and you did a very good job of telling your story--It's very pretty. .."

Arien - "ah Atlantis! The topic has held a fascination for me as well (in fact, my current poetry thread was inspired by Atlantis!) I found your poem to be nostalgic for childhood, as well as a lost realm of pure beauty and security achieved through military victory. The repeated couplet was very effective in communicating the sense of wistfulness.Nice work!"